Monday, May 13, 2013

Blue Haired Alien Girlfriend

Blue Haired Alien Girlfriend


Description 

Joshua is a manager at FishBurgers who walks home alone every evening. One night, he comes across an unusual young woman by the name of Mariella sitting on a bench. He's thrown for a loop when she tells him where she's from, but he doesn't mind. He doesn't mind the fact that she has blue hair either, in fact it makes her all that much more interesting.

The people around Joshua feel that he's a bit odd and know very little about him. Each comes to their own snap judgements about him.

Sometimes love can be a little quirky, sometimes it can be a lot quirky.        

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What inspired the story

My wife and I met at Burger King where I was a manager.  She had a crush on me and I was oblivious to that fact as well as much of reality.  We've been married for 16 years, so I'm sure she's forgiven me for that fact.

Because I was so quiet all the time and never brought a girlfriend to work, my wife was told by co-workers that I was gay.  She took a chance anyway.  Three kids later . . .

I would always take long walks at the time and listen to my music.  She always teased me that I had a blue haired alien girlfriend that I would meet on my walks.  I admitted to it of course. ;) Anyway, that series of events led me to write this short story.  It's a mix of moments in my youth, mixed with a generous helping of fantasy.  None of it actually happened, though similar things did.

Writing process

This is one of the first short stories I wrote.  After writing my first book, Rojuun, I went back and looked at this.  I really liked the story, but realized that my writing at that time wasn't very good.  It helped me to understand why it was initially refused by Asimov Magazine when I submitted it to them back in 2006.

The biggest problem when I was editing was that I didn't start a new paragraph each time someone talked.  I understand that rule now, but at the time I didn't.  Recently, I made even more changes to improve the quality.



The cover is the Antennae Galaxy (one of my favorites) as taken by the Hubble Telescope.  I found a picture of a park bench overlooking clouds and merged the two photos for what is my second favorite cover from my books.


Excerpt


Joshua stopped in front of the girl.  They stared at each other, losing track of time.
“Hello,” she finally said in a silky voice that flowed over Joshua’s body.
He sat down next to the girl.  “Hi.”  The word seemed deep, not just a word, but so much more.  It was as though Joshua was saying ‘hi’ with his soul instead of speaking a casual greeting.  At that moment, hello and hi were the most significant concepts in the universe.
Her blue eyebrows wrinkled in puzzlement.  “Nobody should be able to see me . . . why are you able to?”  Her voice didn’t just enter his ears, it filled his entire being.
“Yeah.  I’m kinda like that too.  No one really sees me, which is the way I like it.”
She frowned and tilted her head slightly to the right.
Joshua noticed her eyebrows were blue all the way to the roots rather than dyed.  He leaned in to study them.
She leaned in as well, gazing deeply into his soul.
Her violet eyes were faceted like gems.  It was nice being so close to the girl.  She smelled . . . different . . . nice.  The scent wasn’t a perfume, but nice . . . like her voice.
“That’s not what I mean.”  A mystified expression crossed her features.  “I’m invisible, as in people can’t see me.”
Her face was perfect with smooth, flawless skin.  Joshua had an urge to run his hand along her cheek.  “What do you mean?” he asked in confusion.  Speaking in full sentences was difficult because he just wanted to stare at her.  The girl’s lips twisted a bit.  Joshua noticed they seemed to have a touch of blue as well.
“What I mean is that I have a device that makes me invisible.”  She tapped a round object attached to her utility belt.  It had little lights that slowly blinked.
Joshua did a double take.  He hadn’t noticed the utility belt at first, being too lost in her eyes.  He looked at the rest of her.  She was dressed in a simple burgundy tunic and a long black skirt.  Around her waist was the silver utility belt with devices attached.  Many of them had flashy lights like the invisibility device.  “Ahh, you’re a Trekkie,” he said with a nod.
Her eyebrows furrowed again.  Joshua loved staring at them.  They were the most amazing eyebrows he had ever seen in his life.
“I am not a Trekkie, whatever that is.”  She took a deep breath, which was enjoyable to watch whether she was a Trekkie or not.  “I’m not even supposed to be here.  I just . . .”  She trailed off, looking toward the silhouette of the mountains.
Joshua put his hand on her shoulder.  “Are you okay?”  He tried to concentrate on what was going on with her and at the same time, pay attention to how nice her shoulder felt under his hand.  He succeeded at neither, his mind exploding in a mixture of sensations.


Conclusion

If you get a chance, I hope you check the story out.  It's a fun little tale of a lonely young man and his blue-haired alien girlfriend.

All my best,

John H. Carroll

Sunday, May 5, 2013

Comic review: Nadir's Zenith

"Nadir's Zenith" by Jackson Compton and Jerry Bennett



Nadir's Zenith is the Brainchild of Jackson Compton brought to life by the fantastic art of Jerry Bennett.

With the advent and harnessing of hyperspace technology, mankind left for the stars with reckless abandon. In the year 2112, corporations are the off-world governments policed by the Intergalactic Peace Corps. Follow the adventures of IPC Space Marshal, Captain John Nadir on his adventures through the galaxy. "Nadir's Zenith" is Space Opera, 100 years in the making!

Jackson Compton is a wonderfully handsome (so he says) novelist, screenplay writer and comics creator.  In his spare time, he doesn't knit, though he knows someone who does.

Jerry Bennett is a comic and children's book illustrator extraordinaire and T-shirt designer to boot!  He once sang in the rain, though they didn't make a movie about it.  That was someone else.

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(All images © Jackson Compton and Jerry Bennett. All rights reserved.)

Comic #1 Description



Jackson Compton - Creator, Writer and Letterer. Jerry Bennett - Artist, Inker and Designer

Standard Comic
Black & White
Page Count: 24
POD (Print on Demand)

Undertaking a secret mission, John Nadir prepares for his departure from Earth to Moon City. Nadir gets more than he bargains for when a simple stop for a layover drink with a spunky Tech Specialist turns into an all-out brawl.

With the advent and harnessing of hyperspace technology, mankind left for the stars with reckless abandon. In the year 2112, corporations are the off-world governments policed by the Intergalactic Peace Corps. Follow the adventures of IPC Space Marshal, Captain John Nadir on his adventures through the galaxy. Nadir's Zenith is Space Opera, 100 years in the making!

Nadir's Zenith #2 TM and © Jackson Compton and Jerry Bennett. All rights reserved.


Comic #2 Description

Jackson Compton - Creator, Writer and Letterer. Jerry Bennett - Artist, Inker and Designer

Standard Comic
Black & White
Page Count: 24
POD (Print on Demand)

Captain John Nadir is recalled to Earth for a secret mission briefing. Little does he know that his very life depends on the outcome.

With the advent and harnessing of hyperspace technology, mankind left for the stars with reckless abandon. In the year 2112, corporations are the off-world governments policed by the Intergalactic Peace Corps. Follow the adventures of IPC Space Marshal, Captain John Nadir on his adventures through the galaxy. "Nadir's Zenith" is Space Opera, 100 years in the making!

Nadir's Zenith TM and © Jackson Compton. All rights reserved.


My Review


Nadir's Zenith is a series of sci-fi comics by Jackson Compton and Jerry Bennett.  The first two are available at Indy Planet, while the third is due to be available in June. (There better be more, just sayin'.)

It's fascinating how comics tell a story primarily through illustrations and dialogue.  As a writer, I have to use words to illustrate all the extra details.  I can't even draw a stick figure well (they usually look like they have broken bones)

I generally do reviews of books, but I grew up on comic books.  My brother had boxes and boxes of them.  My favorite comic book hero was Silver Surfer, with Green Lantern a close second.  Then, in the late 70's, my brother sold his entire collection at the Flea Market for $40, including quite a few 1st editions.  *sigh*

Anyway, I meet a  variety of people on my journey as an author.  One of those is Jackson Compton, who creates the Nadir's Zenith comic series along with Jerry Bennett.  I decided to buy the comic books a few weeks ago.  I put in an order at Indy Planet.  They're $4.00 apiece, plus a couple of bucks for shipping, an excellent price.  About a week after purchase, I received an email stating they had been printed, and a few days later, they were shipped to me.  I received them in the mail soon after.


Book #1 begins by setting the date (2112) and the advent of hyperspace technology.  The illustrations instantly drew me in.   Jerry Bennett's artwork communicates what's happening in steps that move the reader through the story.  One of the best parts about comics for me is losing myself in the images, wondering what's happening in the background and what it might be like to live in the worlds shown to me. Nadir's Zenith has those details in many of the illustrations without ever taking away from the main focus of the scenes.  I believe his talent shines in the facial expressions which lift the characters from the page and make them real.

The story is old school sci-fi pulp fiction (The same flavor as my short, "Test Pilot")  We learn about Captain John Nadir, a tough space explorer for the Intergalactic Peace Corps.  The dialogue is rapid and just a touch snarky, my favorite. :)  Much of the first comic sets up the series, but it's a strong introduction that left me eager to get to the next episode.

And then we're left with a mystery that I don't think will be answered soon.  I'm very intrigued . . .



Book #2 starts on a different world featuring a new race of beings.  Throw in a couple of humans and things go badly as they generally do when humans are involved.  (Trying hard not to give any spoilers)  Once again, the illustrations drew me in, making me want to visit that world.

Then we get back to Captain John Nadir along with a new character, Tech Specialist Seraphina Mitchell. (already my favorite character.  I hope she sticks around)  The background illustrations really deliver much of the story these scenes.  They draw the main characters into events around them.

I love the chemistry between characters and the touches of humor sprinkled throughout.  They're tough in a galaxy that's just as tough.  The story leaves a universe of possibilities for the future.


Each of these comics left me wanting to read the next. I'll be keeping up with this series for as long as they keep writing them. :)

Coming soon, Comic #3



#3 should be out in June.  Keep your eye out for it at Indy Planet!


Indy Planet, a great source for Independent Comics

If you're interested in the extraordinary selection of comics available out there, check out Indy Planet.




POD (Print On Demand) comics

Just as I have my books printed on demand through Createspace, Comic creators can have theirs printed through Ka-Blam.



Disclaimer

I have decided to review books that I enjoy. I am an avid reader of fantasy, so most of them will be in that genre. I'm not taking any requests, just reading what catches my eyes. You'll find that most of these are from Indie Authors. The way I figure it, David Eddings, Anne McCaffrey, Alan Dean Foster and Piers Anthony (my favorite authors) already have enough reviews, but Indies could always use a few more.

It is important to note here that while I am a writer, I am doing these reviews as a reader. I also know a number of the authors I will be reviewing. This is not an exchange of reviews, nor have I been solicited by those authors to write the review.  If I don't like a book, I won't review it.

All my best,

John H. Carroll


Saturday, April 13, 2013

Fantasy maps of Ryallon

Introduction

A while back, I did a post on how I make my maps.  http://ryallon.blogspot.com/2011/05/mapmaking-for-fantasy-worlds.html  As I write, I add to my maps.  So I'm doing this post to show you the updated versions for my books.  I've also named what was formerly "The Northern Continent".  It is now Nulanea.  There are more continents on Ryallon, the closest being Antilea and Pomelea, but this is the only one I have mapped.

All of the smaller maps here are in Nulanea.  I've also changed the font from Carolingua to Fairydust to match the fonts on my covers.

Nulanea
The Continent of Nulanea.  This is the northernmost continent on Ryallon.  This map is found in the Willden, Wyvern and soon to come Crazed Trilogies.




Eddland
The Kingdom of Eddland.  This is the setting of the Wyvern Trilogy.  In the first book, Pelya travels on back roads from Dralin to Settatt where the Blue Wyverns are located.  Book 2 will begin there and continue to Zimth, the capital of Swelth (Not my best names, I know, but . . .)  It will go elsewhere after that, as will book 3.

Eddland is a country of trade and merchants.  It also has vast orchards, farmland and wineries.  It has become wealthy over the last few centuries.





Soaarth
The country of Soaarth.  This one of the settings for the Crazed Trilogy.  You may notice 2 capitals.  It is the only country in Nulanea with such a thing.  Aest is where the senate resides.  They make the policies and laws of the kingdom..  Thea is one of the most active seaports in the world and where the executive branch of the country rests.  The entire coast is filled with trade, but the northern coast is rife with piracy.  The Partade Marshes are toxic to people and are the home a hostile race called Marbu.

The chief crop is parthmellya, a fast growing plant from which paper is made out of, most of which is exported through Aest, which keeps a tight control on it.  Soaarth is also known for wineries and a vast variety of herbs grown found in its forests and hills.





Greffen Province and Cothbern
The Greffen Province of Paruuth and the city of Cothbern.  This is the setting of Rain Glade.  Paruuth is a kingdom that has been impoverished by war between its provinces.  The peasants are poor, most never seeing a copper in their lives.  The Greffen province is tucked into the enchanted Grendia Forest in the southwest corner of the kingdom.  It is surrounded by impassible mountains on two sides.

Cothbern is a completely unremarkable village where Rain, the main character of Rain Glade, lives.

This area may or may not be in the Crazed Trilogy.  We'll have to see.






Willden Forest and Kethril
The Willden Forest where the Willden Trilogy takes place, and Kethril, where book 3 of the trilogy happens.  It is one of the largest forests in the world and filled with magical beasts and Druids.  The Caaldith Mountain range borders the east side of it.

The "Valley" at the bottom is where Tathan and Liselle were raised.  It is nearly unreachable through treacherous mountain passes to Swelth and Klizania, and through an ancient road through the Willden.

Kethril is where the 3rd book of the trilogy takes place and is also the namesake for that book.





Those are all the updates for now.  I hope you've enjoyed them.  I'll do another update in a year or so as I add more. :)

All my best,

John H. Carroll

All images copyright John H. Carroll



Friday, March 29, 2013

Wyvern Chapter 1

Wyvern - Chapter 1 

This is the first chapter of my upcoming book, "Wyvern", Book 1 of the Wyvern Trilogy. It is now available at these stores:

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Pelya’s sapphire-blue eyes sparkled in the heavy afternoon sun.  She slouched in the saddle, studying the village resting at the intersection of two insignificant roads that cut through the endless farmlands of Altordan.

Sounds of a few industrious townsfolk and children at play drifted above the maddening buzz of insects that had dominated her hearing since leaving Dralin.  A mild breeze alleviated the worst of the fall heat and rustled tomato vines that dominated the landscape.

Altordan was a large country existing primarily to protect and provide for Dralin, its capital.  Well-maintained highways spoked outward like a jagged wagon wheel from the city to other countries, but Pelya was avoiding those.  They were crowded and she wanted peace and solitude to think.

Honey, her beautiful chestnut warhorse with blonde mane, flicked a tail at biting flies.  A disinterested packhorse tethered to Pelya’s saddle nosed a bit of grass that had grown in the middle of the rutted road.  It whinnied, probably wanting a true meal.

A family wearing simple clothing and wide-brimmed hats collected ripe tomatoes amongs the vines in the distance to Pelya’s right.  They kept glancing in her direction as though worried she would steal their livelihood.

It wouldn’t be hard if she were so inclined.  Pelya adjusted the chain-reinforced leather sword belt around her waist.  She was a master with the pair of enchanted swords that rested in sheaths at her hips.

She wouldn’t steal from the worried family.  Pelya had spent her entire life in the Dralin City Guard learning that it was important to protect people, not harm them.  Her father had raised her along with more than a thousand Guardmembers she called her aunts and uncles.

She didn’t wear that uniform anymore.  Now, a form-fitting black tunic and pants, both with intricate designs of mystic silver thread, covered her powerful, six-foot frame.  She looked down at the priceless clothes.  Even after days of dust and mud on the road, they were spotless thanks to enchantments Ebudae had sewn into the clothing.

A twinge of distress twisted Pelya’s heart.  More than anyone, she missed the impudent and powerful wizardess who had been her best friend.  Pelya tugged at her long, jet-black braid with a gloved hand to knock the feeling away.  It didn’t help, so she gave Honey a gentle nudge with polished boots and continued toward the village.

Six days had passed since her banishment from Dralin for killing a chancellor of the High Council.  The events kept looping through her memory.  She and others had uncovered a plot to overthrow the High Council and create a new god.  A battle in the ruins below Dralin had destroyed the god and foiled the plot, but even that couldn’t save her from banishment.  To make matters worse, Pelya had been having nightmares about the battle and the yellow-eyed monks who had been possessed by the god.

Pelya rode into the quaint village.  A hodgepodge of small businesses, the largest of which was a two-story inn, surrounded the main intersection.  Pelya was grateful for its presence.  She had camped under the stars since leaving, and while her clothes might stay magically clean, her body didn’t.

A burly blacksmith with cropped hair stopped hammering on a plow.  She waved at him and received a surprise smile and wave of his hammer in return.  There was also a tanner’s shop, a woodworker and a small market she might visit the next day to resupply.  The buildings were painted and well maintained by the hardworking folk.

A group of elderly women wearing bonnets and long, pastel dresses sat in a shady area under some trees.  They stopped their sewing and stared at Pelya for a moment.  She greeted them with a wave as well.  They briskly nodded in return before going back to work.  Pelya ignored the way they huddled together and whispered.  It was what old women did.

Across the intersection from the inn, a soldier came out of a small building.  He was straightening the chain shirt he had just put on before taking his sword belt from an apprentice who hadn’t quite reached manhood.  The apprentice was wide-eye and unsure in his steps as he brushed aside too-long hair while checking his own sword.

Pelya dismounted as she reached the intersection so she would be eye level with the men and not so intimidating.

The soldiers approached with determination.  The elder of the two had a great deal of grey in his carroty hair and a hitch in his self-important step.  The muscular arm he held up in greeting belied his advanced age.  His vibrating, tenor voice carried through the quiet air “Hello traveler.  I’m Sergeant Pifflin of the Altordan army.  What’s your business here?”

“Just passing through, Sergeant.”  Pelya hoped he wouldn’t be too friendly.  “I intend to spend the night at your inn and then be on my way.  You’ll get no trouble from me.”

“See that we don’t!”  Sergeant Pifflin puffed out his chest.  “I may not be in my prime, but I can still hold my own.”  He stepped forward as though to intimidate Pelya.  “I’ve got the might of Altordan behind me too.  Something happens to me and you’ll have the army to deal with.”

Pelya was half a foot taller and could have taken him even when he was in his prime.  She had just finished killing a god, so the threat of an army didn’t impress her.  Instead of telling the man that, she merely repeated herself.  “You’ll get no trouble from me.”

“Ah, well, good then.”  Sergeant Pifflin hooked his thumbs in his belt.  “Where do you hail from?”
“I’ll be at the inn, Sergeant.”  Pelya led her horse around him and toward the stables.

The man stared after her for a minute before turning to his apprentice and shrugging.  The apprentice shrugged back.

As Pelya entered the inn’s stable yard, a chipper young woman in her mid-teens came out of a stall, brushing hay off durable pants and a light shirt.  Her voice was as lively as her manner.  “Hi!  I’m Terry.  Would you like your horses cared for?”  She pulled strands of her ponytail to tighten it in the string that bound it.

“Yes, I’ll be spending the night.  Do I pay you or the innkeeper?”

“You’ll pay my pa.  He’s the innkeeper.”  Terry took the reins Pelya handed her and looked at Honey in admiration.  “She’s a beaut!”

Honey nuzzled the girl’s neck.

“Her name is Honey.  She’s the finest steed you’ll ever meet.”  Pelya detached her saddlebags and slung them over her left shoulder.  They had her most valuable possessions.

“I’ll take the best care of them both.  Shall I bring in the rest of your bags?” Terry asked.

“After the horses are cared for.”  Pelya handed her a silver coin.

Terry took it and then tried to hand it back.  “You’ll want to pay pa inside.  He handles all the money.”

Pelya shook her head.  “I’ll pay your pa.  That’s for you.”

Terry’s jaw dropped.  “A silver?  For me?  I can’t.”  She tried to hand it back, but Pelya was already walking away.

Upon entering the bright common room, Pelya stood for a moment and looked around.  The shutters were open on the windows to let fresh air circulate.  Straw littered the floor to soak up mud and spills.  The stools and table were sturdy wood, likely made by a local artisan.  Four old men stopped talking to stare at her from a table near an open window.  She nodded at them and they nodded back.

Near the stairs, Terry’s pa sat behind a counter that served as the bar and the hotel desk.  He was a stout man with clean clothes and short, tangled hair.  He waved Pelya over with a hairy hand.  “Can I help you?”

 She went over.  “How much is a room for one night and meals?  I also have two horses to be stabled, one of which is a warhorse.  The other is a packhorse.”

The innkeeper stood in alarm.  “A warhorse?”  He looked toward the door Pelya had come in.  “Terry . . .”

“Is fine,” Pelya reassured him.  “Honey likes her.  How much?”  She pulled out her coin purse and undid the strings.  She had more coin and gem pouches hidden within her shirt.

The innkeeper looked at the door again before sitting back down.  “It’ll be three coppers for the room, two for the meals, not including ale . . .” he noticed the quality of her clothes, “. . . or wine if that’s what you prefer.  I’ve got a few bottles, but they’re expensive.  Not much call for it out here.  The warhorse is another three coppers and the packhorse two, so . . .”  He did the math in his head.  “Ten copper pieces, or one silver.”

It was much less than Pelya, used to city prices, had imagined.  No wonder Terry had been so surprised by the tip.  Pelya fished out two silver, hardly lightning the pouch at all.  She pushed them forward on the counter.  “I’ll want a bath as well.  Keep the extra.”

The innkeeper picked up the coins with an expression of surprise on his face.  “Thank you.  That’s more than generous.”

Pelya considered for a moment.  “I should let you know that I also gave Terry a silver piece.  I don’t want you thinking she came by it dishonestly.”

Surprise became astonishment.  “For a girl?”

Pelya leaned forward intimidatingly.  Her voice gained an edge.  “Yes.  For a girl.  Where’s my room and where can I get the bath?”

The innkeeper shrank back.  “Your room is the last one on the right.  It’s the quietest.  I’ll send someone when we have the bath ready for you.”  He composed himself.  “Will you take meals down here or in your room?”

“I’ll take dinner in my room and breakfast down here.”  Pelya moved to the stairs.

He called after her as she climbed.  “Did you want to use one of our locks?  It’ll be no charge for you.”

“I have my own.”  A moment later, Pelya reached the second floor and headed down the narrow hallway.  There were six plain doors on each side and a second stairway at the other end with a rope blocking it, likely for servants.


Pelya entered her room and set the saddlebags on the lone table.  The bed had a straw mattress and clean sheets with a crocheted blanket and a pillow.  A nightstand had a candle, a pitcher of water and a bowl for washing up.  Two chairs were the only other things in the room.

Pelya went to the window and opened the shutters.  There were a few houses lining the street behind the inn and a group of young children playing.  She wondered what it would have been like to be raised in a village like this.

She sat at the edge of the bed and stared blankly at the wall until there was a knock at the door sometime later.  Pelya groaned from stiff muscles as she stood and went to open it.

Terry stood there with Pelya’s bags.  “I have two more trips, but it won’t take me long at all.  Oh, and your bath is ready.”

“Thank you.”  Pelya took the bags.  “I let your father know that I gave you a silver, so don’t hide it from him.”  She closed the door, leaving Terry to stare wide-eyed.  Pelya’s hunch had been correct.  She opened the door again and saw Terry slipping under the rope of the service entrance.  “Where is my bath?” Pelya asked.

Terry unhooked the rope.  “It’s down here in the back.  I can take you.”

“One moment.”  Pelya retrieved her lock from her saddlebags.  She closed the door and hooked the lock on the latch made for that purpose.

She didn’t think anyone would try to steal her things, but to be on the safe side, she cast a simple alarm ward on the door.  It was something Ebudae had taught her.  A few loose strands of braided hair gusted around Pelya’s face as the magical breeze of casting swirled.  It wasn’t a strong spell, or the breeze would have been fiercer.  Terry’s jaw hung open when Pelya turned to her.  “What’s wrong, Terry?”

“You’re a wizard?  I thought since you wear swords . . .”

Pelya moved past her and headed down the stairs.  “I’m not a wizard, but knowing the occasional spell is convenient.  No more questions now.”  At the bottom of the stairs, she stepped aside to let the girl take the lead again.

Terry stopped and opened her mouth to ask another question, but Pelya’s warning glance was enough to shut it.

After a long bath, Pelya retired to her room.  When dinner came, she ate without tasting.  She locked the door from the inside after finishing and putting the wooden tray of empty dishes on the floor of the hall.

Pelya sat on the bed, brought her knees up and broke down into quiet tears.  The young woman was beginning to feel the burden of being alone.  She missed her father.  She missed Ebudae.  She missed the Guard and all her aunts and uncles.

Pelya longed for the sounds and smells of the chaotic city.  There was always danger in Dralin.  Staying alive was a vague proposition on the best of days.  She missed the adventures with Ebudae into the ruins underneath the city.

Now she was out in the world farther than she had ever been before, resting in a quiet little inn.  There was no danger.  Anyone with a silver piece was rich.  At times in her travels, there wouldn’t be a building or a person in sight.  She could stand on a rock and stare for miles in every direction.  It was unnerving.

Pelya dozed off a few times in between fits of crying.  It was terrible to be alone.

She was not handling it well.

***

Pelya saw fear in the milky-yellow eyes of the god.  He wore a brown robe spattered with iridescent gold.  His arms reached out for her.

Then it switched to a different face mutated by anger with eyes of yellow fire.  The robes were violent red.  Its arms flailed as though scolding her.

A woman’s face rotated into view.  Her robes were a riot of colors that pained the senses.  She had no eyes and her hands were clasped to her chest in despair and confusion.

A thousand monks surrounded Pelya.  Their yellow eyes blinked in unison.

Pelya sat upright in a cold sweat.  She threw aside the covers and scanned the room.  To her relief, there were no monks, nor a Crazed God.

The floor was cool under her feet as she moved to the window.  In the east, a touch of morning light lined the horizon with the promise of another clear, warm day.  At one of the houses, the silhouette of a woman yawned and stretched on the front step in anticipation of the day.

Pelya sat on the bed and buried her face in her hands for a moment, trying to find the willpower to make it through another day.  Eventually, she gathered her bags and heading downstairs.

The morning innkeeper, a young man who was probably the innkeeper’s son, served her porridge for breakfast.  He didn’t notice her glum manner as she ate quickly and slipped out of the empty common room.

Terry was sleeping in the stables next to Honey’s stall.  She jumped up, startled when Pelya dropped the saddlebags noisily.  “Huh?  Oh!  I was hoping to catch you before you left.”  Terry wiped the sleep from her eyes.  “I wanted you to know that I took the best care of both horses.  I bathed them and had the blacksmith come and check their shoes.”

“That is exceptional service.  Thank you.  Can I trust you with these saddlebags while I get the rest of my things?”

“Let me get them for you!  Then I’ll get your tack and gear on the horses.  You sit and take it easy.  Have you had breakfast?”

“Yes.”

Terry waited, expecting more of an answer.  “. . . Oh.  Can I enter your room or is the lock still there?”

“You can enter.  There is no lock and I’ve removed the wards.”  Pelya greeted Honey, who snorted and bumped her cheek over the gate of the stall.

“I’ll be done in a bit then.”  Terry ran off.

Pelya went out to the stable yard.  It was empty.  She decided to stretch and exercise.

It didn’t take Terry long to bring down the bags and pull the horses out of their stalls.

After stretching, Pelya felt limber, so she drew her main sword.  As with almost any weapon purchased in the City of Dralin, it had magic.  This was partially because there were so many mages and their apprentices to enchant them and partially because a person needed one to be effective in battle against the wizards that populated the city.  The sword was made of light steel and darted through the air like a hummingbird while she practiced with it.

She drew her secondary sword and did a cursory examination.  It was shorter than her main, but much more deadly.  The blade was the width of two fingers at the crossbar.  Its sharpened edges tapered gradually to the point.  The metal glistened in the dawn light, showing no runes even though it held powerful magic.  The blade didn’t look like steel, silver or any other metal she had seen, it was softer somehow.  Pelya stepped back and hefted it.  It was very light and the braided hilt fit nicely in her hand.

Pelya rolled her shoulders and spun the blades.  She moved her legs and began the drills that would keep her sharp and ready for battle.  Each thrust and parry was precise.  Normally, she exercised every morning to stay limber.  The last few days had been an exception and she could feel it in the tightness of her muscles.

When Pelya stopped, Terry cautiously came forward.  She had been watching for a while.  “Your horses are ready.  Honey is eager to go.”

Pelya saw the warhorse stomping energetically.  She would have to give her a run to work off some of the extra energy.

“I’ve never seen anyone move like you do.”  Terry fidgeted with a horse brush in her hands.  “Who are you?”

“I’m no one.”  Pelya sheathed the swords and went to Honey.  She put her foot in the stirrup and mounted effortlessly.  Looking around, Pelya saw that they were alone, so she leaned over and slipped Terry two more silver pieces.  “I haven’t told your father about these.  If you ever leave, go anywhere but Dralin.”

Pelya retrieved the lead of the packhorse.  As she left the stables and inn behind, she realized she had never learned the name of the village.